tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post4552305722241808622..comments2024-02-27T16:32:32.383+05:30Comments on मेरी भावनायें...: कुछ है.......रश्मि प्रभा...http://www.blogger.com/profile/14755956306255938813noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-15712889090337589782008-05-20T16:48:00.000+05:302008-05-20T16:48:00.000+05:30bhig jana un lamho mein ke yaadon ki barsaat roj n...bhig jana un lamho mein ke yaadon ki barsaat roj nahi hoti,dharti fisal rahi hai,behad sundar.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-56598797452572336552008-05-16T10:49:00.000+05:302008-05-16T10:49:00.000+05:30दिल की धड़कनें पाजेब-सी बजती है......मेरे अन्दर मो...दिल की धड़कनें पाजेब-सी बजती है......<BR/>मेरे अन्दर मोरनी थिरक उठी है,<BR/>होठों पे कोई गीत फुहारों -से मचलते हैं......<BR/><BR/>kuch tau hai jo sab badla badla nazar aane laga hai !!!!! hamesha ki tarah bahut badiya abhivyakti didi !!!!Vandana Shrivastavahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14599723436612383403noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-40830663227768017512008-05-16T06:33:00.000+05:302008-05-16T06:33:00.000+05:30bhavnaon se paripoorna rachna hai....................bhavnaon se paripoorna rachna hai........................bhawanahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02832498197121654865noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-65039189247364688032008-05-16T00:18:00.000+05:302008-05-16T00:18:00.000+05:30"कुछ है....... " एक नवीन, खूबसूरत और अद्वित्य अभिव..."कुछ है....... " एक नवीन, खूबसूरत और अद्वित्य अभिव्यक्ति |संत शर्माhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12067692021413627284noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-5194905053986239022008-05-15T23:15:00.000+05:302008-05-15T23:15:00.000+05:30बहुत सुन्दर, वाह!बहुत सुन्दर, वाह!Udan Tashtarihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06057252073193171933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-63229562811825011222008-05-15T22:47:00.000+05:302008-05-15T22:47:00.000+05:30"कुछ है''............ बेहद खुबसुरत रचना है .........."कुछ है''............ बेहद खुबसुरत रचना है ......... आपने अहसासों को शब्दों में बखूबी उकेरा है .......... शुभकामनाएं...vinodbissahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14512783051305159715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-5210246383598156892008-05-15T21:40:00.000+05:302008-05-15T21:40:00.000+05:30मेरे मन में घटाएँ बहक रही हैं,"कुछ है"-सारी धरती फ...मेरे मन में घटाएँ बहक रही हैं,<BR/>"कुछ है"-सारी धरती फिसल रही है.........<BR/><BR/>बहुत बेहतरीन रचना, बधाई स्वीकारें..<BR/><BR/>***राजीव रंजन प्रसादराजीव रंजन प्रसादhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17408893442948645899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-7154955581293720782008-05-15T19:29:00.000+05:302008-05-15T19:29:00.000+05:30rashmi ji .. bahut achchi rachna hai. bahut hi cha...rashmi ji .. <BR/>bahut achchi rachna hai. <BR/>bahut hi chanchalta aur skaratmakta hai bhavo me ..Piyush (पश्चिम का सुरज)https://www.blogger.com/profile/00430934520633179213noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-62298017685159763532008-05-15T18:29:00.000+05:302008-05-15T18:29:00.000+05:30ati sundar bhav.ati sundar bhav.राकेश जैनhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05865088324047258223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-19539461737411088782008-05-15T15:51:00.000+05:302008-05-15T15:51:00.000+05:30hmmm kuchh to hai hi....:)hmmm kuchh to hai hi....:)कंचन सिंह चौहानhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12391291933380719702noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-3021592645367144492008-05-15T14:40:00.000+05:302008-05-15T14:40:00.000+05:30haan kuch hai ye aagman hai purani yaadon ka haan ...haan kuch hai ye aagman hai purani yaadon ka <BR/>haan kuch hai ye aagaman hai phir jhule jhulne ka<BR/>haan kuch hai ye aagman hai man ko pyar main bhigone ka<BR/>haan kuch hai ye aagaman hai hotho par ghili muskuraahat ka<BR/>haan kuch hai ye aagamn hai tan ko phulo jaisa mhekane ka <BR/>haan kuch hai ye aagamn hai mere saawan ka <BR/>haan kuch hai ye aagaman hai warsha ritu ka..............!!अक्षय-मन!!https://www.blogger.com/profile/05340059809215740706noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-44737267135313214922008-05-15T14:27:00.000+05:302008-05-15T14:27:00.000+05:30im very surprised k koi chand lineo se kaise aur k...im very surprised k koi chand lineo se kaise aur kis tareh itni gahri baat keh sakta hai mindblowing sach me aap se milne ko dil kay raha hai khair bhagwaan ne chaha to aap se ek baar to jaroor milunga,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, and apne kavitao se hame kabhi vanchit mat kariyega,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,deepakhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04357194862252466051noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-43996321727652765282008-05-15T13:47:00.000+05:302008-05-15T13:47:00.000+05:30inn megho main kabhi hame bhi bhingna achchha lagt...inn megho main kabhi hame bhi bhingna achchha lagta tha, kabhi hamare mann kee morni bhi nachti thi....................................................par ab to chinta hoti hai ki kahin mera beta na bhing jaye! sach main har pal ke mayne kaise badalte hai, kaise kahoon.....<BR/><BR/>oh! main bhi kya likhne laga!! ati sundar prastuti!!मुकेश कुमार सिन्हाhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14131032296544030044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-79097973183490824852008-05-15T13:14:00.000+05:302008-05-15T13:14:00.000+05:30आपके लेखन में हमेशा एक कशिश होती है..आपके लेखन में हमेशा एक कशिश होती है..Kavi Kulwanthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03020723394840747195noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-15313439285152751062008-05-15T13:04:00.000+05:302008-05-15T13:04:00.000+05:30वाह बड़ी निश्छल और मोहक भावनाएं..........जब फुहारो...वाह <BR/>बड़ी निश्छल और मोहक भावनाएं..........जब फुहारों में भीगने जाएँ तो इस बेटे को अवश्य बुलायें <BR/>बहुत बढ़िया लिखा हैAvinash Chandrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01556980533767425818noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-19641026351032912932008-05-15T13:03:00.000+05:302008-05-15T13:03:00.000+05:30"सोंधी खुशबू हवाओं में दहक रही है.......मेरे मन मे..."सोंधी खुशबू हवाओं में दहक रही है.......<BR/>मेरे मन में घटाएँ बहक रही हैं,<BR/>"कुछ है"-सारी धरती फिसल रही है"<BR/><BR/>सावन की रिमझिम फुहार में झूले पर भीगती राधारानी का हाल ऐसा ही कुछ होता होगा..डाॅ रामजी गिरिhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08761553153026906318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-72482234112596718632008-05-15T12:39:00.000+05:302008-05-15T12:39:00.000+05:30bheeg jayeye....bheeg jayeye....डॉ .अनुरागhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02191025429540788272noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-4947919614056188632008-05-15T12:27:00.000+05:302008-05-15T12:27:00.000+05:30मन के विचारों का सुंदर चित्रण !मन के विचारों का सुंदर चित्रण !Abhishek Ojhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12513762898738044716noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-88173632992815187842008-05-15T12:05:00.000+05:302008-05-15T12:05:00.000+05:30dhadkan badal gayee hai to use shabdon men bharoau...dhadkan badal gayee hai to use shabdon men bharo<BR/>aur aise geet likho aue aisee shayree karo<BR/><BR/>bahut achha likha hai<BR/>Anilmasoomshayerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03204731223754279697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-90296975682606778442008-05-15T12:01:00.000+05:302008-05-15T12:01:00.000+05:30बहुत अच्छे. "...... सारी धरती फिसल रही है ...." ...बहुत अच्छे. <BR/>"...... सारी धरती फिसल रही है ...." <BR/>वाह !अमिताभ मीतhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06968972033134794094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-41239165250056920682008-05-15T11:59:00.000+05:302008-05-15T11:59:00.000+05:30Kavita acchi hai but ismey virdha bhas hai...ek ta...Kavita acchi hai but ismey virdha bhas hai...<BR/><BR/>ek tarf <BR/><BR/>होठों पे कोई गीत फुहारों -से मचलते हैं......<BR/>मेरी यादों की गगरी छलक उठी है,<BR/>सोंधी खुशबू हवाओं में दहक रही है.......<BR/>मेरे मन में घटाएँ बहक रही हैं,<BR/><BR/>kushi hai <BR/><BR/>to duji taraf <BR/><BR/>kale mega aur yaadey hai..jo shaydd ek tees hai <BR/><BR/><BR/>jab purani yadey tang karti hai to insaan nachta nahi tadapta hai angaro par,,,,Keerti Vaidyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01874727539434284858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6221999038038580932.post-1535115902439960942008-05-15T11:56:00.000+05:302008-05-15T11:56:00.000+05:30shabd ki jadugar to hain hi aap. bhawnao ko kaise ...shabd ki jadugar to hain hi aap. bhawnao ko kaise shabd me bandha hai yah aasan kam nahi.... magar aap yaha wahi kar rahi hain..bahut hi achche tarike se...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12198367357466434652noreply@blogger.com